I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, August 30, 2019
WHAT A DISASTER!!!
Today in literacy our Teacher miss goslin she gave us a book to read for reading it was about the .Rena crashing into a reef and the Rena was carrying 1700 tons of oil and 1300 tons of oil went in the sea 20,000 birds had died most of the oil loads had washed up on the beach people where not allowed to play on the beach or go to the beach until all of the oil was removed from the beach it took three weeks to remove all the oil from the sand on the beach and take away the big contenders that washed up on the beach filled with oil after the three weeks thy finished cleaning up the big oil mess people where finally allowed to play on the beach again everyone was happy that the oil smell and the big oil mess.
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