For the past 3 weeks Mrs Jones's writing group have been doing poems on war and Anzac's this week we have been doing a cinquain poem we also did a Haiku poem and a diamante poem, we needed to use verbs nouns and adjectives for our poems.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, May 21, 2021
Tuesday, May 18, 2021
The Bulford kiwi
Today for Mrs Jones's reading group Tom Fletcher had to make a blog about the Bulford kiwi in England.
the Bulford kiwi is a little known story from the first world war when the new Zealand troops were waiting months in sling camp in southern England waiting for a ship to come and take them back to their home, to keep them busy they carved a kiwi into the hill of the camp to keep them occupied while they, where waiting. for a ship to take them home back from the war. The Bulford kiwi is a large kiwi carved in the, chalk on Beacon hill above the military town of Bulford. part of the Bulford camp was established in June 1916 for the New Zealand expeditionary Force (NZEF).
.The kiwi's body is 1.5 acres (6,100 m2). .From the kiwi's feet to the top of its beak is 420 feet (130 meters). .The beak is 150 feet (46 meters long). .The letters "N.Z" are 65 feet (20 meters high).
when world war 1 ended with the armistice on November 11, 1918 what happened to the thousands of New Zealand soldiers- around 40,000 stationed in Europe and Britain. who had left their homeland to fight and now where still in Europe.
Monday, May 17, 2021
The invisible man
Today in Mrs Jones's writing group we had to blog our writing slide we did today, our word of the day was invisible it was something different to do blog our warm up slide. instead of only doing highlight the sentence with the word of the day and share with a buddy we could also blog our story if we wanted, to.
Tuesday, May 11, 2021
Anzac Haiku poem
Today for Mrs Jones's writing group we all had to do haiku poems, for 3 weeks we will be doing writing and reading on world war 1 and Anzac day.



